Poetry From Youth to Aged
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A Wonderful Life
Night breezes - gentle caresses,
Warm as a first kiss that blots out stars
Memorable as a rollercoaster that grips your heart
Tender as a tear of joy.
Sails - filled by soft whispers
Billowing into autumn years
Horizon the life and loves of a
Sunset absent of regret.
Faded light - gentle caresses
Memories of a heart gone wild
Smiles as ageless as countless
Tender as a tear of joy.
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Thank you G. I was FBing with a friend an hour or so ago, about days way, way back in the seventh grade. I felt a 'poetic' urge to write and poof, there it was. If I'd thought about it, I probably would not have posted it, but I was in the moment. I'm glad it came across well. Thank you for quelling some of the fears I would have been feeling in the morning when I realize I didn't go back and edit...
What a beautiful poem. It grabbed me from the first sentence and took me back to my youth!
Thank you H Drake! You should join Hub Pages. I know your writing abilities. It's free to join and there's a wonderful community of writers out here! We Hubbers LOVE comments! Thank you for taking the time to drop a line. I wrote this on the spur of the moment last night. I usually don't post anything that "fresh". LOL!!
GPAGE Level 4 Commenter 21 months ago
Michael...this is so beautiful. Love the picture too. G