A Nonet Poem of Sadness

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By Michael Ray King

Sadness


Sadness drains the damaged, mournful heart.

The seeping, listless invasion

Squeezes and consumes and saps

Frail vigor. Emptiness

Assaults weariness

Until nothing

Remains but

Hollow

Hope

The 'nonet' poem, I find, is a very interesting 'structured' poem. The structure derives from its one syllable reduction per line, beginning with nine syllables in the first line, to one in the final line. I ran across this style of poetry in a contest on Fanstory.com a year or so ago. I noted today that the nonet poem I wrote back then has garnered quite a few hits on Hub Pages.

Either folks are drawn to the form, or maybe that poem's inclusion of alliteration makes it appealing to readers. For this poem, I forsook the total alliteration of my first nonet. (Click this link to view my first nonet). One interesting writing skill a nonet lends the writer is taking a somewhat broad subject and narrowing it down to ever decreasing syllabic description. Poetry is an incredible skills-set enhancer for writers. More writers should try their hand at writing poetry to improve their descriptive language and flow. I feel strongly that poetry is a great tool to take into almost any form of writing.

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Robert Erich Level 4 Commenter 5 months ago

I've never heard of a "nonet" before. This is a fascinating form of poetry. I really believe it takes a lot of creativity to express oneself in a set number of words. Thanks for sharing!

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Michael Ray King Hub Author 5 months ago

Hi Robert! I thought it was really cool last year when I tripped across it in that contest. I haven't revisited it until now. Limited words force you to make every single word count. Even some of the usually discardable words like "the" and "and" can be very beneficial if used strategically. I work hard not to use those words in poetry, then I find occasions where they assist me.

Thank you for popping in and commenting. Comments lift me up, and on this day,that is a great thing!

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SimpleGiftsofLove Level 5 Commenter 5 months ago

Love it...captures true emotions simply. Up and interesting

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Michael Ray King Hub Author 5 months ago

Hi SimpleGiftsofLove! Thanks for the vote up and thank you for popping by and taking the time to comment! Comments make my day!

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