A Nonet Poem of Sadness
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Sadness
Sadness drains the damaged, mournful heart.
The seeping, listless invasion
Squeezes and consumes and saps
Frail vigor. Emptiness
Assaults weariness
Until nothing
Remains but
Hollow
Hope
The 'nonet' poem, I find, is a very interesting 'structured' poem. The structure derives from its one syllable reduction per line, beginning with nine syllables in the first line, to one in the final line. I ran across this style of poetry in a contest on Fanstory.com a year or so ago. I noted today that the nonet poem I wrote back then has garnered quite a few hits on Hub Pages.
Either folks are drawn to the form, or maybe that poem's inclusion of alliteration makes it appealing to readers. For this poem, I forsook the total alliteration of my first nonet. (Click this link to view my first nonet). One interesting writing skill a nonet lends the writer is taking a somewhat broad subject and narrowing it down to ever decreasing syllabic description. Poetry is an incredible skills-set enhancer for writers. More writers should try their hand at writing poetry to improve their descriptive language and flow. I feel strongly that poetry is a great tool to take into almost any form of writing.











Robert Erich Level 4 Commenter 5 months ago
I've never heard of a "nonet" before. This is a fascinating form of poetry. I really believe it takes a lot of creativity to express oneself in a set number of words. Thanks for sharing!